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She walks down the hallway,
Her long, blonde hair swaying with
The movements of her body.
The guys gawk,
Her full lips any of them would willingly kiss.
The girls are filled with envy,
As green as her eyes.

What they all don’t see behind that
Makeup and polish is
A hollow cylinder,
A hollow cylinder that things pass
Through and through.
Memories of a mother’s death,
A father’s beating.
Memories of nights and nights
Of crying and crying,
Until she can no longer cry,
And falls asleep,
Empty.

She walks down the hallway,
Her short, black hair covering
Her entire face,
Her inner beauty blacked out by
Her dark clothes.
She carries this journal,
That has the most beautiful writings
And illustrations they will ever see.
They will never see.

What they don’t see behind that
Hair and clothes is,
A flower spring waiting to be unleashed.
Butterflies fluttering,
And flowers blooming.
It’s only a matter of time before they are,
Flying and flying.
It’s only a matter of time before she is,
Flying and flying.
It’s only that that keeps her holding on.
©2008-2009 ~HyperActivePrower
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Author's Comments

Ok...so...remember that poetry contest in my area? Well, I decided the other people I wasn't going to submit, so I decided to write this. It seems like a Chicken Soup sort of thing.

Two things inspired it:
1. :iconihatelife1029: has been having this whole campaign (if that's what you could call it?) about rethinking beauty. I think she'd like this.
2. Today, I heard a lyric from a Christian song on the radio that said 'You are the most beautiful thing ever'. I thought that, since you can't see God, he meant inner beauty. It was pretty much the spark that started the fire.

Yeah. Hope you enjoy it.

EDIT: Eee! Guys, guess what? I won!! :D

(c) :iconhyperactiveprower:

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:icontokyoblackwolf13:
so deep.
lol WAY better then anything i could write

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every things better with cat ears! :D
:iconrocking-restrictor:
really deep, awesome

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:iconihatelife1029:
Awwe.
I inspired you.
And I LOVE it!
It's really good.
I like how you send the message that everyone is envyious of her,
but no one really knows what she's gone through or what lies beneath her beauty.
I love this.
:+fav:

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I am I
and You are You
I do my thing
and You do yours,
and in the end,
if we are together,
then it is beautiful.

Valerie


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:iconmickeychan45:
OMG!!! I absolutely love it! Very good choice of words! u so rock my socks!
:iconmagentalilacbat:
:clap:
Amazing! I love the poem, and the message it sends!
I see my friends love it too lol XD

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:iconhyperactiveprower:
XD lol thanks.

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:iconhyperactiveprower:
Thank you :)

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Be who you are because those who matter don't care and those who care don't matter. :heart:~
:iconhyperactiveprower:
Thanks :) I knew you'd love it. X3

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Be who you are because those who matter don't care and those who care don't matter. :heart:~
:iconhyperactiveprower:
Thanks =D

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Be who you are because those who matter don't care and those who care don't matter. :heart:~

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